two people in the Terrible Calm
Hush - be still - be not afraid, for
Where you’re going I am coming too, yes
I will soon come after you and
Echoed in your cries and sighs again
Truthfully my shoulders bear the pain.
Hush - stay close - and be forgotten
Thus perfected in the quiet again, for we -
We two, we whole, will quick be scattered
Among the far celestial fields like grain, yes
Truthfully my shoulders feel the sower’s pain.
Hush - be still - for in this calm
Crouching, waiting to be shattered
Ricocheted to lesser planes
Restless in your cries and sighs of pain, yes
Smooth the creases wrinkled there in pain.
Hush, don’t fear, be not afraid
For I am watching over you
And I am coming after you
And there with tears our tired souls will meet again.
I love reading poems I wrote about dreams. They make me feel all dreamy and sad. This is the first one I wrote in the morning, actually. I usually have to chew them over until nighttime. Otherwise I don't have any good phrases. But this time it was pretty good at the first. I had to write it over quite a few times, sure, but it worked itself out. Yay!
So anyhoodles, please comment with an interpretation if you've got one. Oh! Thanks to Vicky for discovering the flaw with the link to Sukiyaki! Here is the URL. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zqDAGV0TSng
If that doesn't work, you can yell at me or whatever.

8 comments:
love the poem. Did you write this at midnight after staying up like we talked about on Friday?
by the way, your wolf is stuck
I think the poem is about someone abandoning someone and regretting what they did and hoping to meet them again.
Okay. I accept your okayness.
uh, sirianna, I don't have a younger sister, so yea. No voting for me. I really like the poem, you already know my interpretation. So keep writing, please! you're doing some really cool and creative poems and I like them a lot, so keep on.Please.and Thank you
awwww... thanks! :D
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