Perchance there was a land, I'm told
Betwixt the wood and the salt sea cold
Where maidens fair did live alone
With light bright blue-eyed charms of old.
And once, perhaps, there lived a maid
Who deep in her despair dismay'd
Corrupted by her sisters' voices
Always had she spoke or pray'd.
Thus trapp'd in pounding, pulsing sound
Her God, her brethren all around
Did all swoop down upon her close
From up above, the air, the ground.
She chose her death at the nightshade tree
And drank of its prosperity
Then wandered down to the stormy strand
'To Hades, pray not go,' quoth she.
Thus having took that foul potion
Stepp'd the maid into the ocean
Cried, O wind, be still! and hush -
And lost her human heart's devotion.
Still the rushing tempest roar'd
And roil'd of its own accord
The rain with wind-whipped fury lashed
And bit into her very core.
If not for storm or nightshade sleep
Might still the maiden her vision keep
But as it was, she took to surf
Riptided out in the icy deep.
And neither did she die nor breathe
Amid the thund'ring under-sea
But merely slept, and chanced to dream
The earth-begotten fantasy.

8 comments:
Wow! I was here as soon as you put this up.....
Whoa. Weird. I don't know what I think of this one... it's kind of trippy.
Are you in Agra right now? The time seems kind of wonky. It can't be that close to Oslo time there.
Your right about the time.... hmmm..... Well, I must say, this should not be the one to copy into his yearbook. The feeling of this poem is more somber fantasy never coming true but a bleak hope is still there kind of poem.... I don't know how to feel about it. I read over it once or twice but I like philos better.... I still think philos needs another line about having things in common though you don't know much about each other stuck before :This is my pixel within the collective mind, communal body, these unknown organs empowering my spirit
But then again, that is just my opinion....
Okay, let me reiterate: I am just publishing poems that I want to get your opinions on so I can make them better. This is not at all related to any romantic pursuits of mine. Okay? Okay. But thanks for the suggestions.
Oh my gee! that was so good! Write another! EEEE! That was awesome, and like, awesome. wow. Ug, still can't sign in
-Dorky Dork
thanks, palla! So kind of you. You made my day. :)
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